Review Comment:
This manuscript was submitted as 'Ontology Description' and should be reviewed along the following dimensions: (1) Quality and relevance of the described ontology (convincing evidence must be provided).
This paper provides an ontology for image schema using Framester semantics. The ontology can be queried from Framester's endpoint. Image schema is a common and important cognitive instrument for sentence making and creating language expressions. Hence, this newly created ontology can be highly useful and relevant to the readers of this journal.
I can not quite evaluate the quality of this ontology. See my comments below.
(2) Illustration, clarity and readability of the describing paper, which shall convey to the reader the key aspects of the described ontology.
While there are almost no typo or grammar errors, I found the paper quite hard to follow. This is because of 4 types of reasons.
1) Related work is discussed, but they are not compared with the current work. For example, from reading the paper, I cannot tell how this work is different from and superior to Image Schema Logic and ISAAC.
2) Some sections do not flow well. For example, in Section 2--Related work (line 17 on page 3), the current work is introduced as an experimental evaluation. In Section 3.1 (line 18 on page 4), the discussion on the definition of image schemas resumes after introducing the schemas implemented in this work. It is unclear how these works are related to the ontology created in this work.
3) Most importantly, I don't fully understand how the ontology was created. Based on Section 5, some of the procedures are manually done. For example, line 10 on page 7 mentions a manual revision. Line 25 on page 8 mentions a manual exploration, and a manual check of coherence. However, there are no further descriptions of these manual processes, e.g., who did it and the principles to be followed. Furthermore, the evaluation in Section 6 makes it sound like the entire process can be automated. So I am confused as to whether the ontology is created automated or with manual effort. It will be very helpful if a diagram can be provided for describing the overall ontology creation process.
4) Mintor writing issues. The term DOL (line 18 on page 4) is used without explanation. The link to Image Schema Database is broken (line 50 on page 8).
Please also assess the data file provided by the authors under "Long-term stable URL for resources". In particular, assess (A) whether the data file is well organized and in particular contains a README file which makes it easy for you to assess the data,
There is a readme file in the github repo with example queries. No data file is provided, but the entire ontology is accessible through Framester's hub.
(B) whether the provided resources appear to be complete for replication of experiments, and if not, why,
If the ontology creation process does not require manual work, then the provided resources should be sufficient for replicating the experiments. If manual processes are involved, then additional descriptions and guidelines are needed.
(C) whether the chosen repository, if it is not GitHub, Figshare or Zenodo, is appropriate for long-term repository discoverability,
yes.
and (4) whether the provided data artifacts are complete. Please refer to the reviewer instructions and the FAQ for further information.
The current work only includes 6 types of image schemas. While there are other types of image schemas, at least we have a clear idea of what is being covered.
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