Review Comment:
# Summary
The paper presents the INTENT ontology, which aims to represent high-level goals (called intents) in industrial applications independently of the underlying technical infrastructure. The manuscript describes the ontology's main classes in prose and illustrates its intended use through a case study.
# Strengths
The paper addresses an important problem: representing goals at a level of abstraction that is not tied to a specific deployment infrastructure. The inclusion of an industrial use case is also valuable, as it helps illustrate the intended application of the ontology.
# Weaknesses
## W1 Readability
The main weakness is that the paper is difficult to understand. Several key terms, such as "computing continuum," "intent lifecycle," "cloud-edge-IoT continuum," and "coordinated computational fabric," are used without sufficiently precise definitions. In addition, many of the paper’s central claims are expressed in language that sounds technical but remains too abstract to evaluate. For example, phrases such as "formal conceptualization of intent handling," "showing the ontology’s expressiveness," and "operationalizing the ontology as a knowledge graph" are not explained in enough detail.
This lack of precision also affects the validation section. For example, the term "container" appears to be central to the evaluation, but it is not clear what kind of container is meant. At first, I thought a container is to be understood in terms of Software Engineering (e.g., a Docker container), but formulations such as "the workflow class acts as an organizational container," suggests that "container" can also refer to a class in an ontology. Ambiguities like these make it difficult to understand both the ontology and the experimental setup.
## W2 Fit to the call for papers
Ontology description papers are expected to be short descriptions of the ontology, its design principles, and its intended use in a brief and pointed manner. At 29 pages, it is much longer than expected for this category. Moreover, Section 5, "Ontology Description," runs from page 10 to page 20 and largely verbalizes the contents of the ontology rather than providing a concise explanation of the ontology's core design principles and key design decisions.
A further issue is accessibility. Ontology description papers are expected to make the ontology freely and openly available. I could not find a link to the ontology in the manuscript, nor was I provided with access to the ontology as part of the review material.
## W 3 Lack of evidence to substantiate claims
The abstract, introduction, and conclusion make several strong claims about the proposed ontology:
The INTENT ontology:
1. helps humans deploy applications in heterogeneous environments by connecting different domains (see abstract)
2. supports semantic querying, validation, and interoperability (see introduction)
3. can increase trust and governance in connected systems (see conclusion)
These are substantial claims, but the evidence provided in the paper is insufficient to support them:
1. Section 6 presents a single case study. While this use case is helpful as an illustration, one scenario is not enough to justify broad claims about interoperability across heterogeneous environments or about the ontology’s ability to connect different domains.
2. The claims about semantic querying and data validation are also difficult to assess because the discussion remains entirely at the level of prose. The paper does not provide concrete examples of queries, validation rules, input data, expected outputs, or failure cases. As a result, I am unable to determine what kinds of semantic queries are actually supported, what is being validated, or how the ontology contributes to these processes.
3. The claim that the ontology increases "trust and governance" is not developed at all. The paper does not define what trust or governance mean in this context, nor does it provide a method for assessing whether either has improved. Without clearer definitions, evaluation criteria, or empirical evidence, this claim remains entirely unsubstantiated.
# Recommendation
The paper addresses an important problem and proposes a potentially useful ontology, but the manuscript is not yet suitable for publication as an ontology description paper. The paper is too long, key terminology is not clearly defined, the ontology itself is not made available, and the purported benefits of the ontology cannot be verified without supplemental materials.
I encourage the authors to address the weaknesses outlined above and resubmit their work. The idea of representing goals, or intents, at an abstract level is a promising one, but the paper would benefit substantially from a more detailed and reproducible presentation. In particular, concrete examples, including queries, inputs, outputs, and validation steps that readers can rerun on their own machines, would make the contribution much easier to assess.
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