Review Comment:
This paper proposes an integrated ontology that unifies PPR (Product-Process-Resource) and FMEA (Failure Mode and Effect Analysis) modeling approaches, and presents ProQ-KG, a knowledge graph-based framework that enables multi-stakeholder collaboration in analyzing root causes of quality issues within complex cyber-physical production systems, demonstrated through real-world use cases from the automotive industry.
This paper presents ProQ-KG, a knowledge graph framework that integrates PPR (Product-Process-Resource) models with FMEA (Failure Mode and Effect Analysis) through a unified ontology. Building upon prior work, the authors contribute a formally defined set of six dependency link types, an Investigation State Marker (ISM) mechanism, and a collaborative quality analysis lifecycle. Compared to existing FMEA-based ontology approaches, this work demonstrates clear advances in cross-disciplinary knowledge integration, multi-view coordination, and support for knowledge evolution. The originality is high.
Strengths:
Use of real industrial data enhances external validity
The methodology is systematically designed, with formal definitions of dependency links and a clear seven-step lifecycle
The use of W3C standards (RDF/OWL/SPARQL) ensures interoperability and extensibility
Weaknesses and Suggestions:
1 Insufficient coverage of recent related work: In the "Ontological/Knowledge Graph Based Quality Issue Analysis" subsection, although several KG-related studies are cited, recent advances are not adequately covered. Important references are missing, such as KGroot: A knowledge graph-enhanced method for root cause analysis and A comprehensive survey on root cause analysis in (micro) services: Methodologies, challenges, and trends.
2 In Section 6, the paper presents the constructed knowledge graph but does not report quantitative metrics, such as query execution time, accuracy of root cause identification, or user interaction efficiency.
3 The evaluation does not include a comparison with traditional FMEA methods or alternative KG-based approaches, making it difficult to assess the relative advantages of the proposed method.
4 Although the paper addresses knowledge gaps among multiple stakeholders (e.g., quality managers, process experts), no systematic user study or usability evaluation is reported to validate the effectiveness of the proposed approach in supporting cross-domain collaboration.
5 As noted in the data artifact assessment, the provided resources lack complete SPARQL query sets and full construction scripts, which limits the replicability of the experiments.
6 The manuscript is well-structured, clearly written, and technically precise. The logical flow from system requirements, through methodology and implementation, to use case evaluation is coherent and easy to follow. Figures and tables (e.g., the ontology overview in Figure 4, the implementation pipeline in Figure 5, and the KG visualization in Figure 6) effectively support the narrative. The overall writing quality is high.
However, there are several placeholders (indicated by "??") that need to be corrected throughout the manuscript, including but not limited to:
"Table 6 and ?? (see Appendix) shows an excerpt overview..."
"We used our prototype pipeline discussed in ?? to process the data..."
To accommodate the dependency links introduced in ?? , we developed several object properties (OP) that link between classes in ProQ ontology as follows:
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"We summary our contributions with respect to our identified requirements (cf. ?? ) as follows:"
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