Review Comment:
The paper is fairly well written, although it would benefit from some editing, particularly with regard to paragraph structure and the presentation of tables. The author presents an ontology, the Stone Heritage (SH) ontology, implemented in OWL, with applications in the cultural heritage domain, specifically within archaeology. The contribution is particularly relevant for managing data in connection with technologies related to extended reality experiences. Overall, this is a welcome submission for the journal, and I believe it could be accepted after major revisions. Below, some remarks and suggestions are provided.
1) Originality:
Although the scope and aims of the paper are clear, the originality of the work with respect to the state of the art is not entirely evident to me. Let me clarify my concerns.
At pp. 3-4 the authors make two major claims:
i) the SH ontology is helpful for modeling both tangible and intangible entities in the cultural heritage domain;
ii) the SH ontology is an extension of the CIDOC-CRM ontology.
Regarding (i), at p. 8 the authors further claim that the SH ontology is built along two main semantic dimensions, namely the tangible and intangible. Now, the notion of the intangible cannot be fully explained simply as the opposite of physical or material. This difficulty makes it challenging to formally capture such a category, which remains somewhat vague and debated in the cultural heritage community (as one can infer from Paragraph 2 on related work). Yet, the authors do not deal directly with this distinction in the ontology itself, for instance by introducing formal constraints. Instead, they state that “these dimensions are not part of the ontology itself; they are didactic backbones for both the development and the presentation of the ideas behind the ontology” (p. 8).
I suggest moving this statement about the didactic use of these dimensions to the introduction, and clarifying more explicitly in what sense the SH ontology employs, albeit informally, the tangible/intangible distinction compared to the state of the art. For example, the authors mention Qingyang’s study, in which images, videos, or audio files are linked into the ontology rationale to represent intangible aspects. What is the authors’ position in this respect? To me, this does not amount to a genuine ontological characterization of the intangible, which as a category is somewhat abstract. Rather, these multimedia elements appear to provide additional context for referring to the notion of ‘intangible’.
Regarding (ii), the claim that the SH ontology is an extension of CIDOC-CRM needs to be substantiated by specifying which set of axioms has been introduced, and why they qualify as an extension. Without such a formal specification, it is difficult to assess in what sense CIDOC has been extended. It may be that the authors intend “extension” in a looser sense, namely that the main classes of CIDOC are specialized via subclass relations to address the archaeological domain.
If this is the intended meaning, then I would consider this point as the main contribution of the paper: an application of CIDOC in the archaeological domain. In either case, the paper would benefit from providing further details on how the SH ontology addresses the open issues surrounding the tangible/intangible dimensions, and from making a clearer comparison with the state of the art and also the ontologies related to immersive extended reality.
2) Significance of the results
Overall, the backbone of the ontology is well structured and effectively illustrated through the two case studies, Cromeleque das Fontainhas (Portugal) and Calanais I (Scotland). These studies allow the reader to grasp the main ontological engineering choices behind SH and its potential for managing the data it was designed to handle.
With regard to the case studies, however, the historical introductions in Paragraph 4 strike me as somewhat too long for an ontological paper. I suggest shortening these sections in favor of a more concise presentation of the main classes and relationships.
The paper also includes a large number of tables (25 in total), each providing brief descriptions of entities. While detailed, the number of tables risks overwhelming the reader and obscuring the overall rationale. Since readers interested in full details can directly inspect the ontology in an editor such as Protégé, there is little need to report the entire ontology in the paper. It would be more effective to present only the most relevant classes and relations, highlighting how they address practical problems in the domain.
Additionally, the ontology could benefit from some simple yet effective logical constraints. For example, the classes BronzeAge and Neolithic are not explicitly declared as disjoint. This means that if an entity currently classified as Neolithic is later found (as a consequence of further studies, as often happens in history) to belong to BronzeAge, and the ontology is not updated accordingly, the entity will simultaneously fall under both classes without triggering any inconsistency for the reasoner.
3) Quality of writing:
The paper is generally well written and logically organized. However, as mentioned earlier, I suggest reducing the number of tables and also figures (currently 13 figures). I would also move and integrate paragraph 6.1, which is currently in the conclusions, into the introduction or related work.
In the conclusions, some statements would benefit from further clarification rather than being simply stated.
For example, the sentence “These layered elements offer a richer digital representation aligned with concepts of Digital Twins” could be elaborated to explain such alignment with digital twins. Similarly, the statement “The environment is the first E of the 3E approach, which integrates environment, experience, and emotion. Tangible aspects are therefore more detailed” could be analyzed in greater depth. The 3E approach seems to be an interesting notion, yet it is only presented in the introduction and briefly summarized in the conclusions. Expanding on it would provide more insight for the reader.
4) Long-term stable URL for resources
The authors indicate that they are working on providing a stable URL to make the ontology fully accessible upon acceptance of the paper.
I would suggest adding some annotations to the ontology to clarify the engineering rationale.
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